David, The 2nd, 4th and 5th pages have good qualities - loose line, descriptive but not too overdone;the rest of these seem too rigid and stiff. Also, avoid line fills - you're turning a form into a shape. Think of using it for turning a form, rather than describing a tone or color.
David,
ReplyDeleteThe 2nd, 4th and 5th pages have good qualities - loose line, descriptive but not too overdone;the rest of these seem too rigid and stiff.
Also, avoid line fills - you're turning a form into a shape. Think of using it for turning a form, rather than describing a tone or color.