David, Overall, these lack effort. All the poses - save one - are from a frontal or profile stance. A couple show signs of a decent pose but the hands and feet get too blocky and undeveloped. You pencil looks too soft. Try using a harder graphite - like a 2H - and start loosely and lightly. Stay focused and be conscious of the poses you choose and stick with it.
David,
ReplyDeleteOverall, these lack effort. All the poses - save one - are from a frontal or profile stance. A couple show signs of a decent pose but the hands and feet get too blocky and undeveloped. You pencil looks too soft. Try using a harder graphite - like a 2H - and start loosely and lightly. Stay focused and be conscious of the poses you choose and stick with it.