David, These poses are decent - you still must loosen up your line and stop insisting to keep your contours so shape-based. Look at the person carrying the messenger bag. See how there are virtually no spaces in the contour ? A loose, light line will help you indicate the contour that you can then strengthen with a darker line - but don't necessarily have to take it right to the edge of the next surface.
David,
ReplyDeleteThese poses are decent - you still must loosen up your line and stop insisting to keep your contours so shape-based. Look at the person carrying the messenger bag. See how there are virtually no spaces in the contour ? A loose, light line will help you indicate the contour that you can then strengthen with a darker line - but don't necessarily have to take it right to the edge of the next surface.
The poses are nice, but the proportions need more attention paid to them. For example with the girl a top, that torso is way too long.
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