David, These are decent representations of the birds you chose but they are too stiff. Loosen up your line. The drawing doesn't require a contiguous contour... use variety in line (shape and pressure) to describe ambient sides of the birds and sides directly lit. Also, use line inside the contour to indicate different types of feathers.
David,
ReplyDeleteThese are decent representations of the birds you chose but they are too stiff. Loosen up your line. The drawing doesn't require a contiguous contour... use variety in line (shape and pressure) to describe ambient sides of the birds and sides directly lit. Also, use line inside the contour to indicate different types of feathers.