David, Pages 1,5 and 7 are your strongest. There is a defined form but I can tell you're working loosely and trying to capture gesture. Static poses are fine but look to weight shifts in the hips and poses that push weight shift more. Consider people getting up and sitting down from chairs. Don't lose interest where the hands and faces are concerned. They help create a sense of character.
David,
ReplyDeletePages 1,5 and 7 are your strongest. There is a defined form but I can tell you're working loosely and trying to capture gesture. Static poses are fine but look to weight shifts in the hips and poses that push weight shift more.
Consider people getting up and sitting down from chairs.
Don't lose interest where the hands and faces are concerned. They help create a sense of character.