David, I like that you're loosening up your line. You subject's proportions are improving. The third drawing down (despite being out of focus) is your best - it has good foreshortening and overlap - these elements help create good depth to a drawing. Remember this when working in future sessions. Continue to refine your line and develop hands, feet and faces a little more. Good job.
David,
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Good job.