David, I think the first, third and last pages are your best here. I like that you are blocking in proportions first - and that you are trying to work in volumes. Continue this. Work lightly and loosely in this manner... if you can define clothing at the same time, do that, too. Most importantly, don't give up on a drawing until you have developed it - even basic indications of facial features, hands and hair. Also, remember our conversation about posing the character - look to more dynamic, 3/4 poses.
David,
ReplyDeleteI think the first, third and last pages are your best here. I like that you are blocking in proportions first - and that you are trying to work in volumes. Continue this. Work lightly and loosely in this manner... if you can define clothing at the same time, do that, too. Most importantly, don't give up on a drawing until you have developed it - even basic indications of facial features, hands and hair.
Also, remember our conversation about posing the character - look to more dynamic, 3/4 poses.